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As I wrote my researched argument, I thought about many questions that I have. I wondered so many things about animal research, the mentality of the people who did it and so many other things. As I researched more and more about it, I realized that many times people do not want to actually hurt the animals, but just have stuck to the mentality that it is a safe procedure and that it will work just as fine with humans. I feel that having the ability to write about this topic has helped me expand my knowledge about animal research, how its done and why people do it. I never thought about the consequences that animal experiments may bring, but it really is an important topic that should be brought up more often.

I feel like I truly had a great learning experience from this assignment, and I enjoyed reading about it a lot too. For this assignment I used a more traditional argument mixed with a Rogerian argument. I think that over all I did a good job with my paper but perhaps I could improve it by revising it better. I noticed that I missed many comma placements and that I did not separate this paper into paragraphs. Many of my ideas were all stuck together in one very long paragraph and that could definitely be changed. I would like to make it better by separating every idea or argument into different paragraphs. I also noticed that some of my ideas were scattered all over the place and they could be arranged in a more organized manner. I also placed a very specific point in my conclusion rather than a quick sum up of my paper. I definitely think that I should change that for a better ending. Although i did not include my title page nor my citations, I must add that i should double check my citations since they were not correctly written.